Tuesday, 06 November 2001
I've finished a first draft of the insurance story! I trimmed about a thousand words out of it, so it is a much more reasonable length now (4700 words). I'll read it through one more time to make line-edits and try and catch any consistency errors created by all my rewriting. Then I'll send it off to our critique list.
It will be good to get some feedback again. This story will be the first I've sent to the list since it was formed. I'm not quite sure what to make of it. I know there are some weak spots, but it's the best I can do with this story on my own. Maybe someone on the list will be able to help me figure out what this story needs.